is this ok?

[madison]

Coming to a stop I looked around me, I had been walking a long way and this seemed like a good place to rest. I found my way over to a log and as I sat on it I started reflecting on my past.

I was a girl of about 6 when my grandpa started telling me silly stories about this place. He used to live here when he was a small boy, he would say. He mostly told me foolish things about werewolves and monsters he would call them.

As I sigh I realize just how stupid his stories were. He's been dead for almost two years now. I ran away from home a week ago and I don't know where I'm going to stay now. I ran away when I turned 17 and I cleaned out my savings account and I'm reaching the bottom.

Standing up I slam my fist into the nearest tree. Yealping in pain I pulled my fist back. 'I'm bleeding' I thought. (I'm human btw lol)

I feel like I'm being watched and I turn around to see who's there.

[God, what was I doing on this]

Alexstraza stood there witha weird look on her face

[vivampire]

Coming from speaking with her sister. Diana realized the was in a park in the town of forks. She slowed her speed the average walking speed for a human. Walking in the park she heard the yelping of a girl, she turned to see what all the commotion was about. Diana could see that the girl was a human girl. "Ummm, why would you hit the poor tree, if you knew it was going to hurt yourself?" She asked the girl.

[Stacie]

Rain was walking around shopping when she caught the scent of blood. She could feel her eyes darken she had to get out of there. But she wanted the blood so badly. She smelt another vampire around so she had to hope that the other vampire wouldn't attack the human was bleeding. Rain started to walk toward the smell of blood. Who will control me if I go to attack she thought to herself as she felt the venom running down her throat. She slowly walked closer with her sunglasses on so the human wouldn't see her ice blue eyes darken to blue.

[xbuzzybeex]

Sadie had been wandering around for the past few days and had wanted to climb an interesting looking tree for some fun. She'd been in the tree for about half an hour when she smelt a humans blood not too far away. she could also smell a few other vampires lurking around somewhere.
To make the human feel more comfortable, she quickly tanned herself and turned her eyes a dark shade of brown instead of her usual topaz colour. She walked cautiously to the human.